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Korean Education

Korea cultivates many talented people who play an active part in the world.

However, Korean education is handicap for students.
First, most student’s futures are determined by the College Scholastic Ability Test.

School lives of Korean students are judged by CSAT, and it’s grades are very important because students decide the university by CSAT marks.

Secondly, Korean education systems are standardized.

For example, Korea and Japan are the only countries that teach all of their students with the same textbook.

That means these two countries neglect creativity and personal autonomy of their students.

Finally, educational expenses have a big gap among regions.

The people who live in Seoul spend a lot of money on extracurricular lectures, but students who live in small towns do not spend much money on education.

For this reason, a balance of the educational quality is broken.

From these few examples we can know that Korean education system is disadvantageous for students, so alternatives are demanded.