회화시간에 제가 말할 내용의 대본을 짜고 있는데요..
그냥 독해만 하고 해서 스피킹에 대한 문장은 거의 모르다보니 쓰면서도
이상하다는 느낌이 드는데 어떻게 바로 고쳐야 할지는 모르겠습니다.
대충 스크립터를 만들었는데 중간에 헤깔리는 문장을 못만들 겠더라구요

스피킹 수준이 높은게 아니라 "초급영어회화" 수업에서 쓸거라 약간씩 문장에 오류가 있거나 해도 되는데

글로 쓰다보니 구어에 대해서 이렇게 쓰이는지 확신하지 못하는 문장이 너무 많은것 같아요..

대충 한번 봐주시고 말이 안된다거나 조금 더 잘쓰는 표현 같으면 지적좀 해주세요.
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Sport event to introduce next time is extreme physical exercise. As you know, if sport event that challenge in human's limit in Olympic summer games is modern pentathlon, What event does in winter Olympic games? This sport event was made from both cross-country of nordic skiing and firing which were conjoined. What is this sport event?

Yes, this sport is biathlon.
Because both cross-country that is called marathon of skiing and firing were conjoined, it is much harder exercise than any other sport. In addition, must carry gun in shoulder.

It was not known exact origin of this, but used to conjecture that came out in ski troop which is European soldiers formation at 16th century. The first  biathlon contest held at East Germany in 1948, and Biathlon was accepted as an offical sport in the 1968 Olympic games in Grenoble, and is continuing so far. Biathlon has 10 events by man and woman each 5 events, That events are various from smallest 10km to longest 20km.

기본 규칙은, 스키를 타고 가다가 일정한 구간에 도착 할 때마다 사격을 하게 되는데, 매  사격마다 5개의 과녁을 맞춰야한다는 것이다. Unless hitting all of targets, the player has to go additional 150m or one minute may be applied..만약 모든 타켓을 다 맞추지 못한다면, 놓친 과녁 한 개마다 추가 150미터를 가야하거나 혹은 1분의 추가타임이 더 해질 것이다. That is why it is important to hit all of targets accurately. There are two positions in firing and that positions are prone and standing. According to firing position, size of targets is different.

Then!, Now, let's learn about moving method by several situations.
First, When go in flatland, do this. (동작을 보여주면서)
Fold your legs, and swing arm powerfully.
Second, when go to descent, do this.
Fold your leg still more, and attach your arms maximum in body
Third, When go to uphill, do this.
팔자걸음으로 아주 힘차게 올라가라.

Then, let's try preview about Olympics
Perhaps, two people will compete to acquire gold medals in this Vancouver Olympic. One person is Norwegian player “뵈른달렌”  who conquered all events in 2002 years, The other person is  french player "라파엘 프와레" who is famous for couple player.
Although our national player participates this contest, it is very hard to aquire medals at this time.

Then, let's discontinue about biathlon and talk about other sports.


중간에 한글로 써진 부분이 제대로 영작 못한 부분이거나 했는데 약간 이상하게 해서 멈춘부분입니다..
전부 외워서 하는거라 쉬운표현으로 대체할수 있는문장 있으면 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다.

좋은 하루 되시길 바랍니다.