There are many things to give us convenience on the internet.

We simply type the keyboard and click on mouse, and then we can easily find something,

get information or communicate with someone. However, we also can easily blame other people and be so rude,

because we couldn’t see and know each other on the internet. Of course this anonymous system on the internet

could be positive function, but I think it is closer negative function. Especially, some people are doing wrong behavior by abusing

this system. For example, we can so easily see malicious replies on the internet.

They are busy blaming each other and don’t keep manners. Even introverted, polite or passive people can change extroverted,

rude or active only in the internet. Also, sometimes we can hear that an entertainer accused some repliers because of their

malicious replies. Recently, a famous singer who gets a serious illness had to close his homepage,

because some bad repliers post replies deriding him.

As you know, this situation is hard to happen in real world but so frequently happens in the internet.

In my opinion, to solve these problems, it needs more strong laws and policies.

Present penalty about malicious replies on the internet are mild, so bad repliers disregards this penalty and tend to repeat

malicious replies. That’s why I think penalties should be tightened.

이후에 실명제도라든지.. 등등 관련해서 좀 더 쓰려고 합니다.
많이 어색하고 영어 수준도 낮지만... 어떤가요? 제가 말하고자 하는게 어느정도 전달될까요?
다 쓰면 현재 a4 용지 기준 3/4 정도 될거 같은데 분량은 어떤지..?
제 말하기 속도로 이게 2분 정도 걸립니다.

그리고 이제 31일인데.. 미리(?) 새해 복 많이 받으세요.