Inviting Letter

  I'm so happy to inviting you my birthday party, on this Saturday at 7PM. We are going to play some games and recreation. Without you, it will be boring party. Please come and make the party interesting.
  I think this is first time you coming my house. I recommend you ride a train. By bus take too much time. Anyway get off at the Sunleung station and go to number 3 exit. Go straight for about 50 meters, you can see bus station. Take the number 4428 bus at there. 5 minutes later, you will arrive at Gaenari Apt. Get off and just call me. I'll pick you up from there.
  For the party's fun, I want you to bring some board game stuff and specially your electronic guitar. It will make the party so crazy. I heard you practicing new music. I'm so expecting your performance.

뭐랄까, 쓸 때는 정말 자랑스럽고, 하루 지나서 읽을 떈 내 영어 실력이 이 정도 밖에 안되나 씁쓸한... ㅜ
영어 작문 실력 늘리는데 아무래도 한글 써진거 번역하는게 가장 좋을까요,
아니면 그냥 처음부터 영어로 계속 쓰는걸 연습하는게 좋을까요?
전자가 확실히 어렵긴 한데 외국 사람들이 읽을 때 번역투 같은게 느껴지지 않을까 하고,
후자는 쓰다보면 문법이나 형식이 딱 정해져서 전혀 느는 거 같지가 않네요.